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Wanting You
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Wanting You |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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watching you distance between scared to talk look at you despair longing sweeps my body eyes begging for a chance hence forth name lingering my lips curve into a smile then frown anymore at a beg for words chance be taken lost in an instant wondering forever close my eyes picture in my head tugging at mind you forever Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before-Edgar Allen Poe |
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StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
I loved this poem..I know the feeling all to well....Oh, right back to the poem, it was great! Good work.  *~erin~* "Longing for home again but home is a feeling I buried in you."-Greenwheel |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
I really liked the style you wrote this in, nice job.  |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Again---astonding! We'll talk more about this...okay? *faint smile* Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth... |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
can relate to this poem well, great transcription of those feelings, thankyou anya |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
Everyone thank you, I have been trying so hard......and andriod you will get through this somehow. * sighs * I haven't yet but I will to. e-mail me soon ok. thank you all again. ~*Riley*~ Better check that I'm about to upset |
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