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Just a friend |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
Hey!!This is my first poem i send out to the world...Please be really honest with you opions though! ---Just a friend--- He fills my heart with happiness allthough-out the day. I love him so very much in every single way. Ifeel love for him like i never felt before. I would give up the would for him and so much more. I perk up my attitude,so he will notice me. What can i do to let him know how much he means to me? I can't go on without him,it wouldn't be the same. All my days would drag right by,and i would feel so lame. I will love him from here and now on. Living everyday with him is like a peaceful song. A song i sing when i am sad. To represent the feelings i've had. The tears of love i must defend. Because to him, I'm just a friend! ------------------------------------ This song was written for someone but i won't say who...They don't even know who they are!Well they might because i may of said a few things to lead him to think that. |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Heyas, Delaney! Again, I'm so glad to see you posting here! This is great! About your poem---I LOVED how it was simply, yet poetic---easy on the eyes, and with the proper use of rhyme. Like all the rest of your poems---this makes my "favourites" list. Hey, do you want me to send you your old poems back, so you can post'em here? I'm sure they'll appreciate the work you do! I really do! About your boy problem---I think the best thing for you to do, is to tell the guy...so nothing hurts you underneath the surface, and it doesn't eat you away! Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth... |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
Thank you alex! Whenever i need a smile your just who i can turn to!Ya and i like that poem as well...And no it's okay i have most of them in my poetry book..But im glad you kept them all. I generaly would tell the guy but it just won't do any good...For one thing im trying to get over him and the bad part it isn't working! But i apritiate your concern! Once again thank you!Oh and i'll post the one i wrote about you...Okay? |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Welcome to Passions.  I hope you enjoy it here...you've made a good first post! It's heartfelt and touching..made me go aww...Boys are mean, aren't they? Well, keep posting and I'll keep reading.  ~Carly "Feelings are not supposed to be logical. Dangerous is the man who has rationalized his emotions." |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
Thank you so much!I just made alot of new friends here.Did you really like my poem? I guess alex wasn't just being nice cuz he said he really liked my poems.Did him pointing his gun at you affect you desision?just jokeing. Thank you for your time |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
*gives a cute, boyish smile from a distance and thinks: "She's already PiP material..."* Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth... |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
"cute boyish smile" *rolls eyes* Anywho, Welcome to this crazy, wonderful, weird place we call PiP! I am Rhonda *takes a bow*, and, well... I don't often grace these blue pages with my presence, (*rolls eyes again*) but when I do, I will definately look you up! I'm liking what I'm seeing from you so far.  |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
WHY THANK YOU RHONDA! ya "cute boyish smile"that seriously made me laugh! |
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anawnda Member
since 2002-07-26
Posts 113 |
ey your poem is really nice, it reminded me of the crush i had on my ex bestfriend, it obviously went wrong as you see, he fell for my very beautiful friend who was part of my group in highschool, |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
Thanks anawnda,I'm sorry that happened to you.But you gotta know some guys are jerks and if their not one they can be!But you should be happy!(which you are)and don't worry when the time is right more guys will come to you! |
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