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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
""Why Do Ya Think" © 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved Verse 1 Why do ya think I wake up early like the sunrise? That to me you're like the cherry in my cherry pie? Why do ya think I call you the apple of my eye? The real reason why I always put in so much time? Chorus I don't care What they say about us Let 'em talk Let 'em talk oh baby So they stare So what if they whisper Let it walk Let it walk oh baby The one thing That really matters are You and me You and me oh baby And what brings Happiness to us both Don't ya see Don't ya see oh baby Verse 2 Why do ya think I cry happy tears over what've got I pinch myself To see if I am awake or not Why do ya think I tell you I got more then a lot The reason why In summers I always get so hot Chorus Bridge I love your beautiful in and outside Don't be so shy you've got nothing to hide I believe in ya, Cuz' I need ya What more is there to say I'm on your side And Imma try not to break down and cry Cuz' you're my reason, for breathing Chorus. [This message has been edited by Hallucination (07-25-2002 03:55 PM).] |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
This is interesting---what type of music would this go to? Hehe...for some reason, I think it'd go good with a steady beated techno song. With partial voice pedals for ever second line! Haha... But now more on the work. Personally, I think some of the lines were too---too the point. A song is like love...you can't just be outright and blunt. Sure, you get your point across...but it's not really fun. if you "persuade" you way...not be outright, make it a poetic rollercoaster---then it's made!!! Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth... |
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