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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I'm crawling out, of this hole I've dug. It's like a grave, pulling me down deep. How do I get out? Nothing to help me, I'm on my own. It's dark and cold down here, I start hearing noises. Is that you? Where is that coming from? ..........my mind. Insanely trying to escape! Screaming! desperate.. no air... suffocating.. ~In the end..it doesn't even matter...~LP |
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Punk Angel Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 66Pennsylvania, US |
lets c here, the topic tonite seems to be honesty, so im gonna be honest. i never do like free verse poems, but i really like this one, prolly cuz i could relate to it alot. theres alot of emotion in it, its great. juss PLZ dont get addicted to free verse staci, cuz then they might lose their touch! lol u kno wut i mean, ~lylas ~kris |
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