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sinfully_seductive
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since 2000-11-13
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0 posted 2002-07-24 12:32 PM



If I were to expose all that I am
Would you accept me?
If I were to unlock all my mysteries
Would you accept me?
If I were to show you feelings like you've never seen before
Would you accept me?
If I were to open my heart and let out my harbored emotions
Would you accept me?
If I were to graze you boundary of what is permissable
Would you accept me?
If I were to put past reality
Would you accept me?
And if I were to speak to you of my inconceivable feelings and unfulfilled desires
Would you still accept me?

Would you please extinguish my raging fires
And end my lasting hell
Just tell me you'd accept my heart
And all my feelings within it held

same-sex couples are like kama sutra - beautiful but misunderstood!

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Jenabou
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA
1 posted 2002-07-24 12:30 PM


Wow, theres a lot of emotion packed into this one.
I really liked it...and if this person, or people ,didn't accept you they'd be fools.
It takes a lot to expose all your hidden feelings and desires.
Good write.

~Jennifer Nicole Boutilier~

*for someone who's used to heartache,losing it all was just a matter of time*
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

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