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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2002-07-20 01:27 AM



Affection spears down a ladder of liquid
Shyness, a trait only the strong conquer
A lingering feeling dispenses my lonely scowl
A cake engulfed with white snow
Toppings of serene sweetness hover over
Goosebumps become my newest companion
My eyes fly into her blue utopic eyes
Threads of gold are the pinnacle to the blossoming mountain of lust
Skin of silky youth streams through a body of tender fulfillment
Olive skin polishes a physique that could cause a 10-car accident
Veins of rain shower over an embraced love
I yearn for her very touch
I grasp for her but fall agonizingly short
Heartbreak may create a lasting sadness
Soon I shall confront this mysterious beauty
A skeptical grin will hopefully initiate an enticing romance
She becomes the answer to my faintest ring
She steps on the “Welcome” doormat and waltzes through a door of overbearing love
An isolated soul, united with a trigger of love

© Copyright 2002 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
MIdsummerRain
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since 2002-05-19
Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri
1 posted 2002-07-20 02:44 AM


"...My eyes fly into her blue utopic eyes
Threads of gold are the pinnacle to the blossoming mountain of lust
Skin of silky youth streams through a body of tender fulfillment
Olive skin polishes a physique that could cause a 10-car accident
Veins of rain shower over an embraced love..."


Amazing Imagery & Stunningly Beautiful ~Rayne


For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
    increases sorrow...
                  Eccl. 1:18

[This message has been edited by MIdsummerRain (07-20-2002 02:46 AM).]

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
2 posted 2002-07-20 08:19 AM


An encounter of lust and passionate wishes I find here tonight, may you find the courage to embrass what could be.
You showed here a picture of love to be and a soul of longing to maybe be.

Enjoyed the imagery.

Sincerely
Rick

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