Teen Poetry #5 |
not that it matters |
Ynotwrite New Member
since 2002-07-15
Posts 1 |
Not that it matters but I still love you, And deep down I know that you love me too. soon You'll find the error of your ways, And I won't be happy until that day. Not that it matters but i still need you, Beside me in the cold, bitter nights. I know your cold by yourself too, So come home and make it right. Not that it matters but i still think of you, when I'm lying around alone. I can only hope that you think of me too. so someday you'll come back home. Not that it matters but i would do anything to get you back in my arms. Well almost anything anyways unless it brings you harm. |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Love always matters.Welcome to Passions. paladin |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
Hmm... nice write, Last post is right: love always matters Especially to a poet However, about the poem really liked the way you started each part with "not that it matters"... simplifying emotions and then explaining them in depth, shows an unintentional contrast? That's what i think anyways! Welcome Allie |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
A nice entrance! Welcome to Passions and please look in your e-mail for a special greeting. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Unfortunately sometimes it doesn't matter and you just have to do your best to move. However, I think that if you truly believe in something you shouldn't just give up on it. Such is life.. Welcome to PIP. I also liked the repitition in the poem. Lovely. "if you know me so well then tell me which hand do I use?" Tori Amos |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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