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Teen Poetry #5

Moving On

crazymin83
Junior Member

since 2001-09-16

Posts 49
Mass

0 posted 2002-07-15 05:14 PM

Moving on

In life you have friends
Some weren’t meant to be
The ones who weren’t meant to be
You have to let go of
They’ll make you crazy if you talk to them
All though you don’t want too
They want to make you feel awful
And break your heart but if you ignore them, they’ll give up
As much as it hurts move on and forget about them.

In life you have friends
The friends who were meant to be in your life
Those are the people who you can call
And they can make you laugh
They make you forget about everything in the past
Every time your with them you feel like your somebody
They try to make every thing perfect
So if you have friends who weren’t meant to be in your life
Forget about them and move on with the friends who care about you.
Minna
July 15, 2002

"Friends can change our lives quickly, they leave us with memories will last us a life time.."

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2002-07-16 10:03 AM

The difference Minna is that the people in the first stanza, you shouldn't even call them friends at all.
Friends are exactly what you said in the second stanza
Nice to see you sharing again
keep it up

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

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