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Jonathan The Mind
Junior Member
since 2002-07-13
Posts 13
Minnesota

0 posted 2002-07-14 11:25 AM


ANGEL
By: Jonathan L.
I have been to the gates
I have seen the angels
Many took my mind
One took my heart
I am one of the lucky
She is my one and only
She stimulates mind
Body
Soul
I let her go with one word
Do I feel stupid
yes
Does she deserve better
yes
Can I let go
no
Reason
She is my angel


© Copyright 2002 Jonathan The Mind - All Rights Reserved
ericaisamonkey
Member
since 2002-04-04
Posts 51
A little town north of nowhere
1 posted 2002-07-14 05:30 PM


would you be angry if i copied this and gave it to my ex?!?! lol. its very nice.. i can totally relate. lovelotz

*Erica*   :loveya:

Jonathan The Mind
Junior Member
since 2002-07-13
Posts 13
Minnesota
2 posted 2002-07-14 05:46 PM


umm...actually I dont really care...if you lie and say you wrote it then I would care
jave
Junior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 18
CO, USA
3 posted 2002-07-15 04:35 PM


Why don't guys write about me this way?

I loved it. Lucky girl.

Jonathan The Mind
Junior Member
since 2002-07-13
Posts 13
Minnesota
4 posted 2002-07-15 05:50 PM


I am glad you all enjoy my work...
StellarChica
Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207
floating down a river...
5 posted 2002-07-15 11:47 PM


This was great. I liked it alot..I'm a sucker for love poems. But seriously I loved it!!

*~erin~*

"Then again, you're always first when no one's on your side."-incubus

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