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LCBS
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0 posted 2002-07-11 01:01 PM


Judge myself by your perfection
Covers of a magazine
Obsession with a fake reflection
Amplified on TV screens
Judge myself by your own grades
Letters on indifferent papers
Slicing through like torturous blades
Slowly my ambition tapers

© Copyright 2002 Lisa Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-07-11 02:46 PM


nice poem. Good use of words.

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StellarChica
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floating down a river...
2 posted 2002-07-11 04:08 PM


Hey I really liked this one..it's awesome. Good job!

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almost366
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since 2002-07-11
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3 posted 2002-07-11 08:27 PM


I like this a lot. I like the message and the rhythm you've got going on. Nicely done.
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