Teen Poetry #5 |
Judge myself by you |
LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Judge myself by your perfection Covers of a magazine Obsession with a fake reflection Amplified on TV screens Judge myself by your own grades Letters on indifferent papers Slicing through like torturous blades Slowly my ambition tapers |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
nice poem. Good use of words. Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.) |
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StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
Hey I really liked this one..it's awesome. Good job! "I shot the pilot. I'm begging you to fly this for me. I'm here for you to use, broken and bruised. Do you understand?"-Brand New |
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almost366 New Member
since 2002-07-11
Posts 3DC, land of the good times |
I like this a lot. I like the message and the rhythm you've got going on. Nicely done. |
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