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FAITHy New Member
since 2002-06-26
Posts 9NE |
Here is another poem...i know i am not the best poet out there...not even close. I wish i could write as well as a lot of the people here on pip-everyone is so talented and leave me wanting to read more and more. But oh well this is the best i can do. I hope you all enjoy this one...if you dont thats okay too. but anyways if you like it tell me---if not i dont really wanna know what i did wrong:-) God Bless As I lie still in your arms and quietly listen to you breath I silently wonder as thoughts go through my head how did you ever fall for me? Listening to you whisper sweet words as calming as can be I don’t know how u did it How could you take such control of me? As gentle as a mother holding her baby for the first time you gently caress my skin I am speechless and amazed by you I don’t know where to begin Your every movement thrills me like when you run your fingers through your hair how could this ever amuse me? all I can do is stop and stair. Your eyes have a way of hypnotizing me taking me off to another place Making you happy is all i want to do Just to see that boyish look on your face. What i woudnt give to see you to kiss your lips which put me in a daze You forever have me with you You forever leave me amazed |
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StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
Hey, I really liked this poem it was great..showed lots of emotion. Good job!! *~erin~* "Is there a line that I could write that's sad enough to make you cry?"-Gin Blossoms |
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sillywilly Junior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 33oklahoma |
i really like this poem because i can definitely relate. when i had my special someone for those few precious months, you described exactly all that i felt and did when i was lost in him...bravo! |
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