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Xeonox
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0 posted 2002-07-10 12:17 PM


you comfort me in ways
that are only known by god,

with each smile that you show
my love for your ever more grows,

I am glad that I met you
my life will not be same without you,

today your eyes were not left dry,
when i felt i made you cry,

I need you in my life,
through happiness and strife,

you mentioned the words,
oh, how my heart fluttered-
like a bird,

I think of you more and more,
your name is closer to my core,

today you saw me speak,
let go of my fears
and my emotions leak,

from here on and end,
I hope you remain,
for with you I want-
all my time to be spend.


Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

[This message has been edited by Xeonox (07-10-2002 12:21 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-07-10 08:09 PM


This is a very sweet poem. thanks for sharing

Ezt-

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2 posted 2002-07-11 11:59 AM


this definitely very sweet
I hope you get your wishes
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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