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Cinderelly
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since 2001-12-31
Posts 189
NM, USA

0 posted 2002-07-09 03:05 AM


When the harsh summer sun hit the tarmac,
as planes came and went,
I sat at home
all alone.

One plane headed to Michigan,
Colorado,
California,
and
Mexico.

Each one carried away
a friend of mine,
leaving me sitting at home,
making this
one lonely summer.


[This message has been edited by Cinderelly (07-09-2002 02:46 PM).]

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MidnightSon
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since 2002-05-15
Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars
1 posted 2002-07-09 04:33 AM


simon says drink a glass of country time lemonade and get reacquainted with your good friends Laziness, Sloth, Sleeping-In, and their good buddies Beanbags, Playstation, and Sunbathing.
and when all else fails, eat some junk food and take a nap.
"adventure? excitement? a jedi craves not these things."

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

curlygurly
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since 2000-09-12
Posts 276
USA
2 posted 2002-07-09 09:41 AM


I think i know exactly how you feel. all my friends work this summer and noone is ever home. and some of my good friends are in viriginia, north carolina, and colorado. but there are always things you can do alone, or make new friends!

"Don't be ashamed to cry, let me see you through, cuz i've seen the dark side too" The Pretenders

StellarChica
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since 2002-07-06
Posts 207
floating down a river...
3 posted 2002-07-09 01:52 PM


I know just how you feel. All of my friends left me too. It makes me cry at night sometimes...is that weird? I don't think so. But I miss them soo much. But that was a great poem!!

*~erin~*

"Do you like dreaming of things so impossible or only the practical or ever the wild?"-Dashboard Confessional
"Is there a line that I could write that's sad enough to make you cry?"-Gin Blossoms

[This message has been edited by StellarChica (07-09-2002 01:53 PM).]

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4 posted 2002-07-10 12:39 PM


Aww... *hugs* I know what you mean; all my friends are gone too. Maybe use it as a time to get to know yourself, and become your own best friend? That's what I'm trying to do Email if you ever want to talk, okay?
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