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Teen Poetry #5

Mirror, Mirror

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

0 posted 2002-07-08 11:28 PM

Mirror, Mirror on the wall
Why can’t I break your gaze
Trapped in a reflection’s squall
Set my mind ablaze

Mirror, Mirror in your eyes
Why cast back such disdain
Breaking through my life’s disguise
Hang my head in shame

Mirror, Mirror in my heart
Why put up such a fight
You’ve been shattered from the start
Time to make things right

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

1 posted 2002-07-09 01:57 AM

The mirror is a great concept for a poem. It can hold the most meaningfull answers yet contain so many questions.

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

sillywilly
Junior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 33
oklahoma

2 posted 2002-07-09 10:51 AM

I have some of your other poems and you really have talent for poetry. I like this one a lot as well. I like the mirror concept also.

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2002-07-10 12:32 PM

Heeyyy... Lisa I like this one! We must talk soon

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

4 posted 2002-07-10 12:34 PM

Great poem. Very cute and very persavasive. I liked it.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

MidnightSon
Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars

5 posted 2002-07-10 04:42 AM

i just plain like it...

there's a note of hope at the end.
i think that's my favorite part.

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

6 posted 2002-07-10 10:53 PM

a very strong piece of writing, a great poem...

Best Wishes,

Brian.

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