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Teen Poetry #5

Just a moment

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2002-07-08 12:25 PM

Stop
Just for a moment-

Let me look at you,
Wear you-
Paint you-
Write you-
Wish you-
Breathe you-

Come hither,
For my heart quivers,

A moment without holding you,
Feels as if-
A thousand whips are scolding me.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

curlygurly
Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 276
USA

1 posted 2002-07-09 09:51 AM

I know exactly how you feel, as if one moment without them would kill you. Great poem!

"Don't be ashamed to cry, let me see you through, cuz i've seen the dark side too" The Pretenders

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2002-07-10 12:22 PM

thanks for the response.

I appericate it.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2002-07-11 12:02 PM

You seem to be a romantic
keep up the good work
hope to see more in the future
thanks

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

4 posted 2002-07-11 12:26 PM

oooooo...I like it....its different then most of the poems here. It doesn't talk about lost love, it just talks about love.

~LCBS

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