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Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2002-07-07 04:33 AM


not my mind
i don't know
i'll never find
had to be low
i'm not kind

don't want me
don't blam
can you see
i'm the same
you are free

never going there
bye bye all
i stair
i'm tall
you don't care

to late
ya
changed
na
bye bye

[This message has been edited by Deep_Inside (07-08-2002 06:53 PM).]

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Missthang
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since 2001-07-03
Posts 103

1 posted 2002-07-07 03:04 PM


call me an idiot but i'm a little confused. it seems as if you are talking about being missunderstood or being frustrated with yourself about something. i'm not quite sure. it flows very nicely but i would relly like to know what it means.
-AB

"Whatever you are doing, love yourslef for doing it.
Whatever you are feeling, love yourself for feeling it."
       -Thaddeus Golas

Acies
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2 posted 2002-07-08 05:18 PM


I'm not gonna say it like Miss thang did
But I'm a little confused too
If you could give us a little enlightenment to this piece, I'd appreciate it
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 377
i can't stop hiding
3 posted 2002-07-08 06:52 PM


it's about changing your hole lifeand that every time you do, you never realy change at all. your always the same person the same way but you look different to all others.  


acire: about what you said in your other reply to "My week freewill" you have read my works befor under the names Litle_krazy_Pote and mikeykrazy.  

           thanks for the reply



when you live you die
when you die your forgotten
when your forgotten you truly die

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