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Dark Enchantress
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meet Morgana

0 posted 2002-07-06 06:56 PM


I heard the message,
Girlish sex in her voice
I played it again
And I played it again
But it did not change

Not my mother, Father
I know that was not my
Mother

Playing again
and again

I heard the passing

[Jaime]

"I think I would like to call myself 'the girl who wanted to be God'." Sylvia Plath

© Copyright 2002 Morgana - All Rights Reserved
Who iis she
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since 2002-05-14
Posts 41
Some where over the rainbow
1 posted 2002-07-06 11:59 PM


Its Really late i really dont understand this poem all the way either i am to tired or really dumb and i hope its the tiredness, But as far as i am concerned its a great poem.

If history has taught us one true thing is that no Species can last forever...

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Riding
2 posted 2002-07-07 12:56 PM


I don't know what to say about this. Definately pain-filled, but I don't know what to say...
MidnightSon
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since 2002-05-15
Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars
3 posted 2002-07-07 03:38 PM


not the message i would want to find on the machine...
sad and blegh.

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

MidnightSon
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since 2002-05-15
Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars
4 posted 2002-07-07 03:40 PM


missed the library check.

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