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munchkins
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0 posted 2002-07-04 04:43 PM


Artificial Intelligence

Never understood maths; trigonometry, geometry, it all makes no sense to me.
C=5(ab)-7y  I thought C was equal to chocolate or crisps?
I know though that C doesn’t stand for consolidation, or completing the square.
But I’ve found a way to make it seem,
that I do more than just daydream,
     ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE
With my glasses on, I can pretend to be,
A girl heading for a mathematical degree.
Functions, graphs and probability,
will now make perfect sense to me.
But as I stuff them in my bag, I slowly drift away.
into my land of giggles, until another day.


can anybody out there tell me honestly what u think of this poem...i created it in maths as i prefer english anyway!!!

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Match
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1 posted 2002-07-04 07:36 PM


its good im on the run thats all I can say

Do I dare to look at whats really there,
Will I be burned?
I cant see past all the pain and torture that goes on in the places we call,
home.
~Azi

Demonic Illusion
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2 posted 2002-07-04 09:54 PM


that was interesting

Madness is the gift that has been given to me....Mercyless Fate

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3 posted 2002-07-16 10:13 AM


I've always loved math
I always gave it an open mind, thats why
C is just a variable, don't think more of it
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


Dark Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-07-16 12:01 PM


I hate math so I really didn't want to read this. But I did give it a chance and I actually enjoyed it. I'm an artsy kind of person. English is more my thing as well.
Welcome to PIP.

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5 posted 2002-07-16 12:08 PM


Math was always my worst subject and your poem illustrates exactly why, because even all these years later I'm still trying to figure out why I need to know all that stuff. LOL!  Welcome to Passion and please look in your e-mail for a little surprise.
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6 posted 2002-07-16 09:47 PM




*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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clve527
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7 posted 2002-07-16 09:55 PM


You asked, so here is what I think.  If you are going to use punctuation, use it correctly.  It does no benefit to you or the reader to have random commas and periods through out your 'poem'.

Casey

Some editors are failed writers, but so are most writers.
-   T. S. Eliot

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