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sorrowfulangel
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since 2000-06-29
Posts 59
Memphis,TN

0 posted 2002-07-04 12:01 PM


the worst time of the day
is when i am frightened
my heart beat
a constant rythym that echos
somewhere buried within me

it is at those times
that all my forboding thoughts
become my reality
without exception they start to breathe
concepts once being my uncertainties
dance

dance,to the hard thud of each beat
the beat my heart plays out in it's adrenaline song
each one it's own being
thriving on each drawn breath


© Copyright 2002 Chelsie - All Rights Reserved
munchkins
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since 2002-07-04
Posts 5

1 posted 2002-07-05 05:33 AM


keep it up....its sounding good and has emotion....well done
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