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Teen Poetry #5

I Think I Sprained my Toe

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

0 posted 2002-07-03 08:45 PM

Don't laugh,
it's not funny
I think I sprained my toe.

How I did
I'll never figure out
I'm sure I sprained my toe.

It hurts
It truly hurts a lot
I know I sprained my toe.

Anyone have any ice
for me to put on
my surely sprained toe?

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-07-05 05:16 PM

dont you hate when that happens

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

2 posted 2002-07-07 08:59 PM

So brilliant...your use of the toe metaphor was outstanding and I'm in a state of absolute -shock- as a result of reading this. I never would have thought of comparing a toe to the stability of a person's walk, their life, and you've explained the need for help, that your stability isn't so stable anymore and needs care...yes..outstanding...

I hope your toe feels better soon.

~Carly

"Feelings are not supposed to be logical. Dangerous is the man who has rationalized his emotions."
~David Borenstein

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