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Teen Poetry #5

In the Twilight

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

0 posted 2002-07-03 06:38 PM

The Twilight

The street lamps are glowing
the whole world asleep
the clock breaks the silence
and counts down the hours
coffee and caffeine
rings round the eyes
armies of sheep
clash in the twilight
a new dawn approaches
the same old battle fades
the birgs sing
Misery

Andrew

"Pretend inferiority and encourage his arrogance."

Sun Tzu

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2002-07-03 08:39 PM

*ponders this one*

I'll be back...

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

2 posted 2002-07-06 11:11 PM

I get a huggle!!

I liked this...something I can relate to..Hrmm..I'm too lazy to pinpoint everything I like about it, but know that I do. Nice to read you again, Mister Zu.
~Carly

"Feelings are not supposed to be logical. Dangerous is the man who has rationalized his emotions."
~David Borenstein

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

3 posted 2002-07-06 11:29 PM

Know the feeling all to well....great job

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