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Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2002-07-02 10:12 PM

this is to my ex-girl firend who is also my best and of my firends

the pain and the suffering
that i have done with for my hole life
things keep going worng for me
and theres no getting wawy from my strife

i have lots of expirences from the past
their is also a futrue that i rather not know
the present means nothing to me
all i care about i reath not show

nothing to give to the wourld
and nothing that i could get back
i'm becoming uesless
and many things that i lack

i'm fighting with myself
more and more each day
if i can't hold on any more
i have no reason to stay

and haveing nowhere else to go
i will live in the darkenss of my mind
looking for nothing
untill the end of time

pain has become my firend
depression i'd rather be there
i smlied from time to time
all i have is an expressionless stair

no matter how many words that i wright
the papers will always tell a lie
never wanted to be here this is where i am
and when i talk to them i onlty here a sigh

why are others running away
but you always stay and hang around
we've had time togeter but we moved frome their
another person like you is something i haven't found

no more of this
i always say
but no matter what i do
they can't here it my way

back and forth
it will always go
but it will always come back to
no

Thank you for your time :shy:

when you live you die
when you die your forgotten
when your forgotten you truly die

SavingGrace
Junior Member

since 2002-05-31

Posts 26
not yet found

1 posted 2002-07-02 10:56 PM

great write, just please fix the grammatical errors cuz that drives me bonkers when people do that!

~*Grace*~
You wouldn't be so concerned with what people thought of you if you only knew how seldom they did...

oakly234
New Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 4

2 posted 2002-07-02 11:32 PM

This poem was enjoyable reading. A lot of emotion in it, which makes it even better. Besides the few errors it was quite good.

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

3 posted 2002-07-03 04:54 AM

nice write thanks for sharin!

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StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

4 posted 2002-07-08 10:33 PM

that was good..i liked it alot. thanks for sharing.

"Do you like dreaming of things so impossible or only the practical or ever the wild?"-Dashboard Confessional

curlygurly
Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 276
USA

5 posted 2002-07-09 09:38 AM

That was awesome! It reminded me a lot of my recent break up. I wish i could express myself as well as you can!

"Don't be ashamed to cry, let me see you through, cuz i've seen the dark side too" The Pretenders

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