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fearing-laughter
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since 2001-04-24
Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

0 posted 2002-07-01 07:17 PM



i've always had
the rhymer's voice
whispering it's mocking words
softly into my ears
waiting for the moment
when i will finally become weak
and succumb to my fears

"go ahead and try
to write your little poems
of happiness and cheer.
joyful memories of lovers never forgotten
and eyes that never teared.
because you and i both know
the darkness is always near..."

"and do please continue
to quote,
the poor, sad, pathetic fools
that were naive enough to believe
'love conquers all!'
and 'the grass is always greener,
on the other side'
because you and i both know
in the pain filled,
meadow of your mind.
the grass has already turned brown,
withered, and died."

-bergundy-

i guess i would offer an explaination for this, but i am honestly too lazy. lol. be happy y'all!


maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

[This message has been edited by fearing-laughter (07-02-2002 03:28 AM).]

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Match
Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286
Canada Edmonton
1 posted 2002-07-01 07:35 PM


Do I dare to look at whats really there,
Will I be burned?
I cant see past all the pain and torture that goes on in the places we call,
home.
~Azi

SavingGrace
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since 2002-05-31
Posts 26
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2 posted 2002-07-01 10:22 PM


no explanation needed. so i wont try to explain myself either then. just great write!!!!

~*Grace*~
You wouldn't be so concerned with what people thought of you if you only knew how seldom they did...

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3 posted 2002-07-03 05:05 AM


that was a great poem i really liked it!

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