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Tomer
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0 posted 07-01-2002 01:36 AM       View Profile for Tomer   Email Tomer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tomer




Face descending into the grass
Tears engulf my face
Cries of forgiveness are forever lost
Clouds clutter my mind
Paralyzed with fret
Your body becomes lifeless
Dreams of happiness are now sorrow regret
Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock
Time at the end of its own sector
Realization becomes the key to a rusty door
Bury my soul
Redemption, nevermore

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sillywilly
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1 posted 07-01-2002 10:08 AM       View Profile for sillywilly   Email sillywilly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sillywilly

Its sounds like you are hurting. The poem is pretty deep. I think it is good though. Its good to express all emotions. I hope things go well for you.
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2 posted 07-03-2002 05:00 AM       View Profile for punkrockerrobin   Email punkrockerrobin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit punkrockerrobin's Home Page   View IP for punkrockerrobin

nice write thanks for sharin!

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Lexy
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3 posted 07-08-2003 10:30 PM       View Profile for Lexy   Email Lexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lexy

my lord..you are good. Thats going in my library. This is amazing..
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sixington
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nice! soulful...
 
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