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ericaisamonkey
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since 2002-04-04
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A little town north of nowhere

0 posted 2002-06-19 04:01 AM



               Kisses of Novocaine
Your lips
Are like novocaine
A temporary paralysis
I cry silent
The tears have no meaning
To you
To me they're a relief
A suppression of all the anger
And hurt
Throwing it deep into my soul
Hiding it
Your touch
Is like hot coals
Burning my body
Trying to love
While being hated
Is quite the chase
Kiss my lips
Burn my flesh
I can't feel it anymore
The pain from my broken heart
Sends a quiet chill
Down my spine
Within seconds
It's over and done
The numbness consumes me
Nothing left to say
About your kisses of novocaine.

*Erica*

© Copyright 2002 Erica Reeves - All Rights Reserved
Jenn Cirrincione
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1 posted 2002-06-19 02:32 PM


This was really well done.
I don't remember reading much from you- now maybe I'll make a point of it.

Nice job on this
Jenn

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ShortSexyAngelOnEarth
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since 2001-12-24
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2 posted 2002-06-19 04:33 PM


this is really well written. its not really my type of poetry, but it has good rythem and balance. all in all, good job!

Maryn
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CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14
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3 posted 2002-06-19 06:04 PM


I liked this one.  It has a lot of emotion in it.  Interesting write, but I really enjoyed it.  Thanks for posting.  Nice job, Erica.

      - Cody -

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songsoftheaftermath
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since 2002-06-19
Posts 84
a world of disarray
4 posted 2002-06-19 08:38 PM


this is really good. i enjoyed it a lot. my best friend was my drug...but a different kind ....this one's great- i can relate to it heaps.

could the darkness be my friend?

ericaisamonkey
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since 2002-04-04
Posts 51
A little town north of nowhere
5 posted 2002-06-19 09:20 PM


This is one of my more recent poems.  I wrote this about a guy that i had fallen for, but was a really good friend of my brothers. Hey, in the end things worked out okay. hehe

  Thanks for the comments, i really do appreciate it.

*Erica*

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