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SavingGrace
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0 posted 2002-06-14 10:37 PM


On that day
Everyone will be there
You all pretend to care
You will look into my casket
And wish I were there
You'll cry those tears
But I won't believe you
I didn't let any of you near

I'll be gone
Nothing will ever hurt me
And I will never hurt you
One last time I'll hurt
One last time you'll hurt
One, Two, Three
I'm gone

*I wrote this on the night I lost my best friend cuz of something stupid I did. I finally decided to post it tonight cuz I'm down once again and I just happened to have it right here. Great to be alone and crying on my birthday. Sometimes things really suck....*

~*Grace*~
You wouldn't be so concerned with what people thought of you if you only knew how seldom they did...

© Copyright 2002 Raegan Brynn - All Rights Reserved
LCBS
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1 posted 2002-06-14 10:53 PM


Happy Birthday, you are not alone, you are on piptalk with many others this lovely Friday night.

I have these thoughts often....who will mourn for me when I die...


People will mourn for you and me, we may not realize it now...but they will


Great Poem!

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2 posted 2002-06-14 11:04 PM


Happy Birthday

I am sorry you are feeling the way you are....I caught the sadness and emotion in your poem,  and wanted to welcome you here and let you know we are glad you found us....cheer up....I hope it all gets better for you....hugssss


Lauren~/Greeneyes

Its been a long road
Getting from there to here
Ive known a wind so cold, seen the darkest days
but now the winds I feel are only winds of change

Mon Cherie
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3 posted 2002-06-15 11:08 AM


Happy Belated Birthday.

Don't be too harsh on yourself. We have to learn to forgive ourselves for what others have done, so I'm sure your friend would've forgiven you too.

Don't be too sad. There are times in life when we feel exceptionally down, and nothing seems to be meaningful, but it's just a phase. Life is still around us, and we should not look back on the past. Just look towards the future and learn from the past

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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4 posted 2002-06-16 01:36 AM


Welcome to Passions. The poem was very sad, but I do hope you come here often.

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