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lauren03
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0 posted 2002-06-13 06:51 PM



Why did you have to go away
to leave me here where you should stay
although it's not the end, I feel it may come soon
I do love you and that's why I may go away
the hurt and anger once felt before are not welcome here anymore
I miss you already and you haven't been gone so long
so far away from me you are
I want to reach out and grab your hand, but your too far away now
I'm afraid of what may come of us
I don't want to loose you but I feel I already have
your the only one who has treated me this good
your hugs and kisses feel so true
even them stupid ass jokes which always seem to make me laugh
the more I think of you the more I miss you already
soon, I hope, we'll be here together again
because I feel the distance will tear us apart

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1 posted 2002-06-13 09:55 PM


Distance blows... a lot. I live in Maryland and my boyfriend lives in North Carolina. We've been together a year and 8 months. So who knows? Maybe you've got a shot? Sometimes it's better to let it go. It's up to you. Just be honest with yourself.

[Jaime]

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2 posted 2002-06-15 01:15 AM


I'm not going to talk about distance, cause the distance between me and Andrew has both of you beat , but I will talk about love and endurance. If you feel for him the way I think you feel for him, and if he feels the same, you will find a way to make it work. Long distance relationships aren't as bad as everyone seems to make them out to be. Yeah they're hard, but if two people are in love, (or even just like) then they WILL endure, no matter what the rest of the world says. If you ever need someone who understands where you're coming from, don't hesitate to email me, okay? I might just email you to check up on you and see how you're holding up You're not alone in this. If no one else will, I will support you
~*Rhonda

A broken heart may hurt me, but a broken heart won't kill me.

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3 posted 2002-06-16 11:28 AM


BRAVO!! i can so relate 2 this!!!i liked this alot, good job!

~U will always remember the people that touch ur heart, but u will never 4get those who break it~

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4 posted 2002-06-16 03:23 PM


Rhonda! LIAR!

Distance is terrible. Awful- really. My boyfriend lives in Texas, and although he is one of the best men I have ever met- I'm not the type that can survive this. My mind and heart change daily as to whether I can hold down the fort or bail out. I hate it, it sucks. Then you have all those cheating lines, did I cross them?? Didn't I? What is he doing everyday without me? Do I really love him the way I think, or am I just craving his attention and affection? I've dealt with this before as many of you might remember, (that case was a little different however...I won't go into it now) but that distance sucked too. Anyway, I understand your pain, nice write.

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

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