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Teen Poetry #5

And what then?

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

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0 posted 2002-06-13 01:45 PM

If it were just like it is,
in the movies...
And our hearts just-
knew it was right...
And every smile was a sunset,
and nothing could go wrong.
And what then?...
If it couldn't get any better,
and our love was just too strong.
When "Heaven is a place on Earth",
and we're floating above on cloud nine-
And what then?...
And it's forever that implies;
life will always be this way,
just like it is in the movies...
And no one ever tells us,
what we should do;
as it all comes crashing down.
And the realization-
real life is nothing like a movie.

And what then?....

[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (06-13-2002 01:47 PM).]

C?
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 190

1 posted 2002-06-13 04:46 PM

and what then? well, maybe what life IS really about

wicked cool poem,

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2002-06-17 05:29 PM

and then what?

then you pick yourself up and learn from it

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

Cinderelly
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since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

3 posted 2002-06-18 12:51 PM

real life is nothing like a movie.

That is so true! Great poem . . .

Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2002-06-18 03:28 AM

Jenn-
What Acire said.
This is VERY well written and very powerful!
There is much truth and wisdom in this write.
Well done!
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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