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SlowDrag
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since 2002-01-10
Posts 53
Tx...need i say more

0 posted 2002-06-12 03:55 AM


ok this i wrote for extra credit in spanish 3...hah it's about my undying love for britney spears....who btw i'm gonna see in concert on friday ....not that i'm a huge fan but she's hot ...and so is her opening act (i'm not even sure who she is but she's a hottie)....well if you can translate this i think it's pretty funny. have fun.


Britney Spearos

Enamore con este chica,
Pero no me amo tambien
estoy enojado, me duele mucho,
la quiero todavia....

ella me dio luz,
pero se fue y estoy en el oscuro,
ya estoy solo y llorando
y mi corazon esta quebrado...

Chorus:
Roto mi Corazon
Roto mi Corazon
Roto mi Corazon
Roto mi Corazon

Se volvio a mi,
Ya estamos enamorados,
Me ama...Britney Spears...
Nostros ya nos easamos,...

Chorus 2x

and all i wanna do is be there for the things you're going through....well is it good for you?...is it good for you?

© Copyright 2002 Eric - All Rights Reserved
LilTai
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 189
United States
1 posted 2002-06-12 08:33 PM


Cute and funny, but the grammar is very off in many places...la necesita ayuda, pero..bien hecho =)

   Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

deadeyes
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since 2001-11-07
Posts 33

2 posted 2002-06-13 12:27 PM


It needs a lot of work in terms of grammar. Those american teachers have to bring ppl who actually know how to speak Spanish fully jeje Because it's not the first time I hear ppl learning awkward spanish out there in the states and it's dissapointing. Anyways, nice concept and as long as you had fun doing it that's what counts. I'm not a Britney fan though and never will. And keep learning spanish it is a great language. Any questions in spanish i'm always glad to help.

"Silencio..no hay banda..no hay orquesta."
"We hear a band yet we don't see a band". It is all a recording."
"Silencio. It is all an illusion".

SlowDrag
Member
since 2002-01-10
Posts 53
Tx...need i say more
3 posted 2002-06-13 01:31 AM


haha...i dont know the language..just a few words here and there that i pieced together to write this for extra credit...i'm a white little punk rawker who wont put forth the effort to write his own name half the time learn a new language....haha so anyhow...thanks for the comments. ill try harder next time.

and all i wanna do is be there for the things you're going through....well is it good for you?...is it good for you?

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