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Hopeless Romantic
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since 2002-05-22
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0 posted 2002-06-11 10:18 PM




The choices we make
Could be the life we break
It all rests upon are shoulders

Where we go
What we know
Are like giant boulders

not until the pressure met
can we rest

the choices we make
determines the life we make


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Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2002-06-12 03:44 AM


Completely and utterly true. I couldn't agree with you more. Very well done.....

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AngelShell
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2 posted 2002-06-15 11:12 PM


Wow!
This was really really good.  I am very impressed with the standard here.  The ideas behind it are very real and very vivid, sometimes it's hard to get thoughts like that down but you managed it really really well...
I hope to read more.

~I haven't memorized all of the cute things to say but I'm working on it~

Jenn Cirrincione
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3 posted 2002-06-16 05:36 PM


Yeah yeah- quit reminding me would you!

I'm so indescisive it's sickening.

Good job, the truth hurts, but that doesn't make it any less true.

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

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