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cutiepiesugarbabie Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110A Cloud In the Sky |
I’m alone, longing for you touch When you read this, think of me And how I loved you ever much And all of our time, years three All of the days spent before they, We without any care in the world, Why could we not forever stay? But objects came to our life, hurled An obstacle that tore us apart Someone that caught your eye And to my heart you threw a dart I need, I must, to ask you, why? Don’t forget that I love you so, If you won’t have me, you must go. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm a big fan of shakespearean sonnets, but at the same time, I don't know if there are other kinds. But I'm used to sonnets with 10 syllables each line. Forget about all the technicalities, and this poem is very well written. Not to mention, sweet too. You are a very talented writer and you should keep it up. Thanks for sharing again. là où est mon amour? |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
bump là où est mon amour? |
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cutiepiesugarbabie Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110A Cloud In the Sky |
hehe thanks for the comments and trying to 'bump' my poem back up again!  o*~Everyone makes mistakes-get over them and make more tomorrow!~*o |
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cutiepiesugarbabie Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110A Cloud In the Sky |
hehe thanks for the comments and trying to 'bump' my poem back up again! o*~Everyone makes mistakes-get over them and make more tomorrow!~*o |
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