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Deepdarkangel55
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since 2002-06-06

Posts 7
Somewhere deep in wonder

0 posted 2002-06-06 11:22 PM

    I have pondered the meaning of my life
    been disappointed with my conclusions
    I have balanced all the joy and strife
    realized my own delusions
    I have been in love with love
    but burnt by the fires of passion
    I have looked for hope from up above
    yet only seen more dismal signs the sky gray and ashen
    I have danced on the clouds of naive satisfaction
    tripping on the truth
    I have saw the consequences of my own inaction
    realize my conjecture is moot
    I have feared for my future and regretted my past
    looking for some peace
    I have been in first and stuck in last
    still I feel at ease
    I have done many things some great most small
    I have found circumstance, not size is most important of them all
    for what good is a man without a caring soul
    nothing but emptiness, a void, a never-ending hole

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

1 posted 2002-06-07 10:40 AM

In love with love... that's a really bad situation to be in! I know, coz I've been through it

But I'm happy for you! Your poem ended with a hint of hope, which I hope lies within your soul. So, don't give up!

You'll be rewarded for your patience

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

2 posted 2002-06-07 01:53 PM

You know, I really liked this. The way it was written was refreshing, and even though the content was rather dismal- it was also quite truthful. I do hope you realize, however, hope does exist, and happiness is out there. Nice one.

Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

3 posted 2002-06-07 10:10 PM

I love poems like this. I like to breath it in. Looks like we've all got to figure out where we are and where we want to go. Who would have ever thought it'd be so damn hard though? Yeah, life is. Thanks for posting this. I really enjoyed reading it.

[Jaime]

"I think I would like to call myself 'the girl who wanted to be God'." Sylvia Plath

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