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Teen Poetry #5

Heart's Race

Words_of_Glitter
Member

since 2000-10-25

Posts 90
USA

0 posted 2002-06-06 04:27 PM

It hurts so bad to to breathe sometimes
Time is moving so fast, but I am stuck here
(With you)
My heart won't move on
And it didn't move fast enough to catch yours
So I am going to keep running through life
(At a standstill)
Until I get rid of the pain in my side, that has traveled to my heart
Or until your heart slows down enough to realize
That it isn't necessarily being chased...
It just has someone that wants to run along beside it.

"Time really does fly by and no one knows where it goes, so if you have something to say or do, say or do it now."

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2002-06-06 05:04 PM

VERY awesome!!! Seriously, I loved this poem. The ending was a shocker, and twisted to fit the depth of a beautiful piece. Very well thought out and written. I loved it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

songsoftheaftermath
Member

since 2002-06-19

Posts 84
a world of disarray

2 posted 2002-06-27 01:42 AM

this is awesome...i could just picture myself in your shoes. a very enjoyable write..like javier said- i loved the last line. keep posting!

could the darkness be my friend?

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