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0 posted 2002-06-03 03:39 AM


"Bad Moments"
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

Verse 1:
Old man lives in a cardboard box,
He calls "Home Sweet Home".
Divorced once, he's lived the
Past forty years alone.
Besides whiskey and cigarettes,
He has no friends at all.
His family doesn't even know him,
They're not there to see him fall.
He is begging for change all day,
No break for a broken man.
People shout: "Get a job, you slob".
But no one seems to understand.

Chorus:
It's so hard to live, such bad moments.
It's such a shame they're even there.
The road of life is much too crooked
Long and lonely, and so unfair.

Verse 2:
Mother and child in their wrecked car,
Driving down to the pen.
She is gonna meet her daddy,
Whose not out 'til she's ten.
They walk into the sterile room,
Where he's waiting anxiously.
He cries when he sees her,
His heart is aching terribly
She reaches for the glass to touch him
One hour's all they get
So time flew by with the I "love you's"
Spoken with such regret.

RE-Chorus:

Bridge:
The folks making all that easy money,
Are getting the hardworking people down.
They say with a laugh, "You don't own a dime"!
Do you know how ridicules that sounds?
'Cause they don't care that...

RE-Chorus:

© Copyright 2002 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-11 12:02 PM


I really liked this song. It had a lot of meaning and I thought that was great. Very well written. One of my favs from u.

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songsoftheaftermath
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since 2002-06-19
Posts 84
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2 posted 2002-06-27 01:47 AM


ooooh i loved the second verse...sent shivers down my spine bri...well done with this song, now if only i could hear music put to it as well!

could the darkness be my friend?

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