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inspiredpoetwriter
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0 posted 2002-05-28 07:47 PM



5/28/2002
Hey here's a new 1 i jus did a few mins ago plz tell me wut u think honestly plz bye!

Title: *Log In Love*

Log in love is my place to find
A lover for life my soul mate who’s fine
I type in hi to see who responds
This person called gurl_#1
I tell her my name she tells me hers back
Hey Abby I say
Do you want to hook up?

She gives me a smile and says let me think
So I wait for her answer we talk some more
About where we live what we like
We have a lot in common
That’s something special
To both of us.

Moon goes down we’re still talking
Been 6 hours I think I’m starting to love her
I open up my heart I tell her my feelings my past
I hide in the dark to others that don’t know.

I watch her type her message that says
Cam I love you will you go out with me?
I sit here for a minute
Another minute than I say
Abby I’d love to.

Today we both smile at the time we first met
Abby’s now my wife with 3 kids
Running around I’m
Glad I logged on to
Log in love I found my
True love.

¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥

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1 posted 2002-05-29 12:45 PM


That is totally my story! Well, not the marraige part yet, but the rest of it is. That was cool! Thanks for the read!

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2 posted 2002-05-29 01:53 PM


This is so beautiful, im so glad you found happieness. when people are so pesamistic about relationships you are one of those storys which brings hope.
God Bless, Clare

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

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3 posted 2002-05-30 09:59 AM


What a cute story!!! Absolutely loved it

Sometimes I get so weird
I even freak myself out
I laugh myself to sleep
It's my lullaby

aVriL lAvIgNe

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4 posted 2002-05-30 03:58 PM


Yeah,...maybe....well...- no not at all.
I'm sorry I'm just a bit cynical on this issue, it hits me rather closely and stupidity is not a fond memory. Eh....good for you all if it worked. Miracles can happen I guess

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

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