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Demonic Illusion
Member

since 2002-02-07

Posts 50

0 posted 2002-05-28 01:18 PM

Slice through your soul with a tiny dagger,
Through vast emptiness souls stagger.
Madness spills through the shadows on impulse,
Touch your skin begin to twitch violently convulse.
Suddenly forever knows what I've done,
Living day after day without any sun.
Flesh upon the brink appear another Demi-god,
Demonic creatures combined for one giant pod.
Sacrifice of human flesh only the best,
Rip my soul from my very chest.
Sink slowly into the pits of Hell,
Lead the dark army and all is well.
Time to face the fear within you,
Nothing is all you can sit and do.
I could be right I could be wrong,
Unleash Hell is the sound of my song.
No survivors demons collecting souls,
Burn the bodies in small secluded holes.
Won't stop till every army has died,
To all those who thought we lied...
Welcome to our world,
Welcome to your own Hell on Earth.

Demonic Illusions, Frostic Dragons, Bloody Tears From Me To You....all surround by a force of Untouchable Darkness

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-05-28 01:48 PM

Great poem and it flowed very well...nicely done and thanks for sharing this with us!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

2 posted 2002-05-29 01:13 AM

hey,
damn this was really dark (just refer to me as captain obvious) but i did enjoy it. it isn't one of those pieces that the writer composes just for..i don't know...attention? it is actually a very good piece of poetry that has flow and it's own sort of beauty. thank you for sharing this piece.
-bergundy

maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

3 posted 2002-05-30 12:09 PM

This seems to be really dark..... but good try

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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