San Juan, Puerto Rico
Let go of the bad and invite the good. I enjoyed the poem. Since you said to inform you on what I thought of the poem: I liked it a lot but the Elizabethan style comes out of nowhere. It kind of surprises you. Usually it sounds better if the whole thing is in that style or if the elizabethan is put in quotations for effect.
Anyhow.....that's just my opinion. The poem was well done, and the message was nicely put.
I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.
Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you