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Walking Away

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Kellie_Cantrell
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0 posted 05-27-2002 02:47 PM       View Profile for Kellie_Cantrell   Email Kellie_Cantrell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kellie_Cantrell


Walking away is never easy
and Isn't something I want to do
leaving the past behind
keeping away from the dark cloud
of depression that hovers overhead
Bless th eone and only
For teaching me so well
Keeping me in the light so well
Thank Thee Thank Thee
I will never walk away from thee
© Copyright 2002 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-27-2002 06:05 PM       View Profile for xShUgArHiGhx   Email xShUgArHiGhx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit xShUgArHiGhx's Home Page   View IP for xShUgArHiGhx

Never walk away from the lighter side of things...once your pulled out of the depression i think its hard not to be tempted to let yourself wander back into it...good poem Thanks for sharing

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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2 posted 05-30-2002 08:01 AM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Let go of the bad and invite the good. I enjoyed the poem. Since you said to inform you on what I thought of the poem: I liked it a lot but the Elizabethan style comes out of nowhere. It kind of surprises you. Usually it sounds better if the whole thing is in that style or if the elizabethan is put in quotations for effect.

Anyhow.....that's just my opinion. The poem was well done, and the message was nicely put.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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Not bad. Great emotion in so few words. Nice.

Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

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it's true, walking away on anything is never easy
but if it's for the best, do so
thanks for sharing

l o est mon amour?
donde est mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

Kellie_Cantrell
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5 posted 07-13-2003 04:12 AM       View Profile for Kellie_Cantrell   Email Kellie_Cantrell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kellie_Cantrell

but holding on is worse
sixington
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6 posted 07-14-2003 01:52 PM       View Profile for sixington   Email sixington   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sixington

nice poem. very thoughtful, even in so few lines.
 
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