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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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how does it work when no one listens when there's another person dead in this circle called adolscence another junkie graces the cover of a tombstone when her blood runs dry after she decides she's fed up did I really accomplish anything? there's a story in every room there's a problem in every closet there's the riddle of why, in every thought it's not the answer you know far from it I've been there, done that with my blood escaping someone'is there for you no matter what you think I wasn't there for you that day we weren't there for each other now i talk to others when i see the destruction in their eyes because at 15, my life is hard enough same as someone elses there are other girls who've been through the nightmare I have So when your skies turn black and your heart feels dead can you remember that I'm still alive and you're going to be able to say that to because you know you've just survived another day Regina L 2002 |
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Who iis she Junior Member
since 2002-05-14
Posts 41Some where over the rainbow |
OMG this poem was so good and so true!I know it doesnt mean much from me (i am new) But i though this poem was so good and i can relate to it realy good so thanks! Τ׺·. .·º ËriÇ康. .·º×¤Î |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Regina, my favourite line: there's the riddle of why, in every thought indeed, when the going gets tough, the tough gets going...suicide may seem terribly appealing at times but it shouldnt be a viable option...kudos to you..  |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
Regina you always hit the truth so hard in your poems. This was so bleak but then at the end it turned hopeful. I liked seeing the contrasts. I loved how you worded this, as always. You wrote this beautifully and honestly. Always loved that about your works. Keep writing hun. this is in the library ~tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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devil_tongue Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 50 |
Regina, I am impressed immencely by the overall structure and flow of this piece. It truly speaks to the writer and your pain is evident to such extrodinary lengths. Through each line there is a captivating essence that cannot help but draw the reader in. I look forward to seeing more of your work. |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
I really enjoyed this. Maybe Another Day may have been a more effective title than none? Just a thought. ~Susie |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
-ina- this was wonderful. thanks for sharing -bergundy maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio- |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Wow, Ina, wow. I seem to be saying "wow" a lot lately.... there's something wrong with me.... Anyways, great write... |
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