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Ree Ree
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0 posted 2002-05-18 05:22 PM


** this is actually a song so it sounds kind of weird like this, but whatever....


I went away for a day and a day
when i came back everything was away
there's nothing more that you could say
to change the way i feel.

You say your sorry
i think your liein to me
you say your sorry
i don't beleive you boy
you say your sorry
is that an actual fact?

It's not your fault, it wasn't you
you didn't know what else you could do
now you pretend you never knew
the way that'd make me feel

You say your sorry
i think your liein to me
you say your sorry
i can't believe you boy
you say your sorry
is that an actual fact?

You say your sorry
it's not your fault
whose fault is it n e ways?
oh yeah it's mine i forgot

You say you're sorry
is that and actual fact?

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1 posted 2002-05-19 01:55 PM


Hi, this somehow reminds me of M2M's songs..i wonder if you like that group? and i wonder what relation has the title "Got Milk" has  with the song??

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Ree Ree
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2 posted 2002-05-19 07:22 PM


got milk is kind of a personal joke, but it's not funny. I had a relationship and this guy messed around and i explained the failure of our relationship like this "We have a perfect cookie ( meaing relationship) and he chewed it up, spit it out into the street, ran it over with a car, and ate it again...it's called got milk just cause people relater eating cookies to milk... that's all...lol
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3 posted 2002-05-19 10:09 PM


Hi ReeRee,

sorry about the jerk but thanks for explaining your title...

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4 posted 2002-05-19 10:22 PM


Good poem song thingy icouldnt tink of it as a song until i hear the beat but....

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5 posted 2002-05-31 05:03 PM


I hate M2M..don't compare lol Then again if the lyrics are kinda pop then yep you could say that. And second, I love it when ppl put something completely different in the title than the poem but if it is a joke it doesn't give the reader any way to think. Still you made your point..weird..but that was your purpose :S

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6 posted 2002-06-01 04:21 PM


I liked the song a lot Thanks for sharing ree and thanks for clearing up the title LoL It didnt make sense at first but now everythings aight

Sometimes I get so weird
I even freak myself out
I laugh myself to sleep
It's my lullaby

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7 posted 2002-06-02 10:55 AM


i thought it was rather good, i could even hear a good rythm in my head as i read it

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8 posted 2002-06-06 12:33 PM


Hey, I don't know about you, but I don't spit my chewed up cookies on the street!
No but really, I liked the song. I hope to see more soon!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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