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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
When growing up we all must learn All things happen for a reason Earth's fire-we must let it burn Rain will come in its season All things happen for a reason This flame has burned for generations Rain will come in its season Drown the flames of sweet temptations This flame has burned for generations Through years of tears to put it out Drown the flames of sweet temptations Do not despair in times of drought Through years of tears to put it out Fallen smiles and saddened eyes Do not despair in times of drought Do not swallow your own cries Fallen smiles and saddened eyes When growing up we all must learn Do not swallow your own cries Earth's fire_we must let it burn |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Very well done pantoum, Lisa, and so true. Was this your first one? It's very good. Keep it up!  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Who iis she Junior Member
since 2002-05-14
Posts 41Some where over the rainbow |
Yours is so true and so good! Τ׺·. .·º ËriÇ康. .·º×¤Î |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Great job, Lisa!! You must have put in quite some effort to make this poem make sense...  I've seen this form of poetry before and tried it, but I've failed badly... no sense came of it.  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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IKNAP Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 47Torrington, Connecticut |
LISA YOU ARE A GREAT POET EVERYTHING YOU WRIGHT OVERWHELMS ME. YOU SHOULD CONTINUE TO POST |
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