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Who iis she
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Some where over the rainbow

0 posted 2002-05-15 04:07 PM



I feel as though sight has left me.
Though color were Black and vivid and was dull.
As though shapes were unseen and size were unimportant.
I feel this way whenever i look into your eyes.
however plain you are in apperence you are beauitiful in existance.
All there is to know about you is that everyone would love you if they saw what i see when i look into your eyes.
**Thanks jamie**

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skyshine
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Beneath the northern stars
1 posted 2002-05-15 05:02 PM


Welcome to Passions! Nice to meet you. A very powerful first post!

~sky

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Land of Never-ending Summers
2 posted 2002-05-16 11:14 AM


Hi Erica!!

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!

Very well written first post you have here!!!! We look forward to seeing more of your work in our forums.

Pls check your email for a card from us.

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Florence

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On the streets w/ people
3 posted 2002-05-18 10:52 AM


Welcome welcome welcome, I hope you enjoy it here, I thought this poem was very interesting, good job!

"Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato.

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4 posted 2002-05-18 11:09 AM


Nice work here!
I like your prose-like style in your poetry, very creative.

Can't wait for more.
Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

Spirit Of Twilight
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5 posted 2002-05-19 12:16 PM


Is there anything more intense than eyes?
Keep writing!
Neha

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
6 posted 2002-05-23 10:02 AM


Welcome to Passions!!!

This was a very good first post I definately look forward to reading more from you in the near future!! Thanks for sharing!!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2002-05-23 03:25 PM



Welcome to Passions.  I liked your first post.  Looking forward to more!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


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8 posted 2002-05-26 02:37 AM


Very well done. I enjoyed this first post!!
Voiceless
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Under the stars upon the wind
9 posted 2002-05-27 08:14 PM


Hey!
Way to join the family.
Your poem is great,
thanks for sharing it with
us and i am looking forward
to more!

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
10 posted 2002-05-27 08:34 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!
Very nice first post!
I know you will love it here.
~Hugs, Nancy~

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