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Enlightened! ( One of my best, please read!)
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Enlightened! ( One of my best, please read!) |
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Le Capitan de L'Amour Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 60 |
Your beauty enlightens me, like lightening the thoughts of you makes want to be with you, I miss the days when we slept together on the couch, I miss the enlightment that you brought with you that inspired me so much, as I was becoming the men you wanted me to be you left me in shambles, I say that you have no heart, but its not up to me to make such judgment, upon yourself you brought tears of sadness, madness, hysteria, and despair, compared to what you brought to me that was nothing. But now as you gathered your thoughts, after you cried for me, as I knew you would, you knew that we belonged together and as you came to my arms again in that glorious day, I once again had the happiness in my heart that I hadn’t felt in a long time, baby I really missed your hair, your smile that brought so much light to my thoughts, to my imagination that had been so empty for such a long time, baby light me again with that fire that had been ceased, light the candle of our love, to begin a chapter that doesn’t contain darkness, only the light of our pure love, because true love cant be broken, because true love is to care for one another, as I cared about you when you left as I prayed for you to be happy even if it wasn’t with me, but now I thank god for hearing my prayers, for making you realize that my love was real, that it wasn’t just a game, and as we go to bed once again, I ask you to be happy, because our souls are so in touch with each other that when you suffer, I suffer, because in this world of darkness the only enlightment that people have is to know that someone cares enough about you to love you, thats why everybody you love enlightens you in some way out of the darkness to reach the star that is unreachable, that’s why to love is to enlight |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Umm...wow?!?  This was really amazing and incredibly sweet! I hope whoever inspired this will get to read it because it's really beautiful. You have the right to be majorly proud of this one!"in this world of darkness the only enlightment that people have is to know that someone cares enough about you to love you" I loved that part the most...sooo true! Keep writing!  The day you were born, you were born free |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is a really sweet write I'm just glad to see you both happy in the end Great write, keep it up Thanks for the read là où est mon amour? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
A romantic indeed. Very well written. I enjoyed it very much. I seldom see your poems here, but hope to venture within the forums and see your alias a bit more often.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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