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Touched by Fire!
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Touched by Fire! |
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Le Capitan de L'Amour Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 60 |
The day I saw you, you were on fire with that red provocative dress you had, I was just looking at such beauty and thought of you and I, but then suddenly like the breeze which blows the fire you turned and looked at me and we locked on one another, I felt what you felt, like we were soul mates, then you giggled and gave me the look of interest, but I didn’t dare ask you cause it was too good to be true, but at the end of the day I saw you with that same fire in your eyes, and I went to you and since then I was touched by fire! |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Good for you, Captain!! Finding love with the lady in red.  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Sounds like there truly was a firey chemistry between you two!! Nicely written poem iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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songsoftheaftermath Member
since 2002-06-19
Posts 84a world of disarray |
hehe..cute! could the darkness be my friend? |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
*ahem* *holds up frying pan* SIZZLE Hee. ^^ Well done! Leah |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Well done- You paint a very vivid picture..... |
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