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TigerZ
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since 2002-01-02
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0 posted 2002-05-10 05:36 PM


Honey…doll
Candy’s not as sweet as you
All the sunsets in the world
Will never be as beautiful
The stars in the sky will never twinkle
Like the ones in your eyes
No ones happiness
Can be as complete as mine
For you are the one
Who makes my heart beat
You are the one
Who makes my soul sing
Another like you I will never find
You will always be mine.

A life without love…is no life at all.

© Copyright 2002 Leandie Erasmus - All Rights Reserved
Le Capitan de L'Amour
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1 posted 2002-05-10 06:07 PM


That was really nice, its nice to be back and see people post their feelings like that!
Keep it up!

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2 posted 2002-05-11 01:06 PM


OOhhhh... TigerZ!!!!!!!! Wild cat, you...
This is sooooooo sweet, it's going to make the girl of your dreams fall at your feet!!!! Lucky girl!!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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3 posted 2002-06-10 11:29 PM


I really liked this poem. I connected with it completely. Very well said, and written.

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