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0 posted 2002-05-09 10:55 PM


I only speak in verses
Eternal curses
No dealin with the ordinary
Alone-don’t want to marry
Life a whirlpool
Hated school
While dated all the fools
Left life for knowledge
All dreams burned foliage
Can’t settle down
Just cause I am brown
Don’t mindI sound
keyed up as a gee
free from rules
loving passion
and joy ridin
chalked up once
twice by fifteen
and leavin this thug
life-
full of strife…

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

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1 posted 2002-05-15 11:36 AM


Interesting piece..different from what im use to from you but a nice change.

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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2 posted 2002-05-16 09:54 PM


This Is very good i think the words tie together great.
(I know you really dont care what a newbie like me has to say but ill tell you what i think anyways)

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