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Teen Poetry #5

i cry for you

corey14
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

0 posted 2002-05-09 05:06 PM

i am crying
because i love you
and knowing i cant have you
and never will
crying because you mess w/ me
because i cant take it
take it anymore
just stop it
it hurts inside to not know
please tell me
let me know what you think
let me stop crying
and not wanting to know
because i know it will make me cry even more
just because i cant take it
let me know
stop this pain that i feel
what did i do
all i ever wanted was you
i love you more than words can describe

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2002-05-13 10:17 AM

All I can say is stay strong
Thanks for the read
Hope to see more of your work in the future
thanks

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

inspiredpoetwriter
Member

since 2002-01-05

Posts 104
Minnesota

2 posted 2002-05-14 05:06 PM

Good poem i agree keep strong, veddy well writen hon!

°•Ang•°

:)

:Smile:

¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥

MidnightSon
Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars

3 posted 2002-05-15 02:18 AM

ask her.
the pain of knowng is easier to move on from.

"The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite."

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2002-05-15 11:21 AM

aww sweety i understand your pain all too well...::hugs::...i hope you feel better soon..but if it helps any, the poem was great and you expressed yourself really really well!!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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