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Cinderelly
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0 posted 2002-05-06 01:01 AM


Moving on,
moving away,
leaving behind
this place
in the distance.

Time gone,
too quickly,
can't be,
shouldn't be,
time to say goodbye.

One day,
hopefully soon,
you'll look back
on this place,
and want to return
once again.

© Copyright 2002 Jamie - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-06 01:39 PM


Im a firm believer that every now and then you need to change it all around, mix it up..ya kno what i mean? i think that your move to nyc will hopefully help you gather your thoughts, not 2 mention the fact that its just an awesome place

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Cinderelly
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2 posted 2002-05-07 12:57 PM


It's not me moving, it's a person I know . . .


Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown

[This message has been edited by Cinderelly (05-07-2002 12:58 AM).]

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3 posted 2002-05-07 09:44 AM


Very good write Cinderelly
It's simple but full of meaning
If this someone is really special, you both will find a way
I hope this do work out for you and your friend
thanks for the share
keep it up

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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