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Low Man's Lyric
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In a dream

0 posted 2002-05-05 02:18 PM


Our Haven

Hey, what is going on I said?
There is no Teen Chat to be read.
Now where is my circle of friends?
Isn't this the haven without ends?
Why take away something so pure?
The reasons to me are unsure.
But from what I do know,
It's respect that we don't show.
We fight, we talk, we laugh, we share,
That's how we show that we care.
Every family has a fight,
Even if it doesn't seem right.
There's no where else I'd rather be,
Then in Teen Chat, with family.

This is dedicated to the Teen Chat forum, and in hopes that it will be brought back to PIP.

No signature for now, come back later. Oh wait, isn't this one?

© Copyright 2002 Aaron B. - All Rights Reserved
LCBS
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1 posted 2002-05-05 08:45 PM


did you read the reasons they took it away for?

I'm actually starting to realize that our little break from Teen Chat is a good thing....you should go read the discussions


~Lisa

kaile
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2 posted 2002-05-05 09:30 PM


Hi Aaron,

i won't want to trivialise your feelings...but you can always post your musings in Teens...and i will try to find the time to read and respond...friends can be made via this way, yup

i'm Kaile...nice to meet you


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3 posted 2002-05-06 01:41 PM


I completely understand where your coming from but i like lisa dont think its such a horrible thing after all. I miss the teen chat forum but not necissarily what happened there. But it definately was a great dedication poem to it!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Low Man's Lyric
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4 posted 2002-05-06 10:41 PM


Hi Kaile, nice to meet you.

Man this poem kind of sucks, it doesn't flow quite right for me. Oh well, thats what you get for writing something at 4 am.

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