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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2002-05-04 08:30 AM



Welcome to my world,
of all the utter hatred.
Of all the broken hearts,
and of all the guys I've dated.
All of them hurt me,
so why are you any better?
After all the broken promises,
my heart becomes deader.
From all these tears,
I fear I'll never be free.
Why does it seem,
everybody's against me?
Welcome to my world,
is all i had said.
Welcome to everything,
I always seem to dread.
Is everything I've gone through,
is any of it real?
Everybody gives me a hard time,
whats their deal?
This feels like a bad dream,
As my tears glisten.
I've got so many problems to be said,
only no one's there to listen....


~if you want me to fall for you, you gotta give me something worth tripping over~

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (05-04-2002 08:31 AM).]

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AliveAgain
New Member
since 2002-01-07
Posts 9
In the clouds
1 posted 2002-05-04 07:47 PM


this is a really good write. and believe it or not, people can relate. thanx for the read and its just perfect for a day i feel so alone. know that you're not the only one out there.
Punk Angel
Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 66
Pennsylvania, US
2 posted 2002-05-05 03:04 PM


woah this one is cool!! heck...u kno i can relate!! don worry tho...u didnt REALLY think ud find "the one" in nowheresville did you?? welp im here 4 ya gurl...u juss rember that!! luv~kris

We love what is lost, but does what we lost love us back??    
~*Krista*~

peachesNcream
Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
3 posted 2002-05-05 03:39 PM


i's love's it! lol hehehe member im always here to listen..good write like always lol all my love ~Jess

*-LiFe TaKeZ uR DrEaMz aNd TuRnZ tHeM uPsIdE dOwN..FrIeNdZ TaLk AbOuT U WhEn uR nOT aRoUnD..PeOpLe MaKe PrOmIsEz THeY JuST CaN'T KeEp..& i'Ve cOmE tO

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
4 posted 2002-05-06 01:45 PM


Sounds like how my world use to be...i completely understand the type of world your living in and i hope that one day you'll see another more happy world. Until then keep your chin up and keep fighting against it..

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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