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Teen Poetry #5

Just Like Rain

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2002-05-04 08:26 AM

Sorrow melting my heart,
tears dripping down my face,
just like rain.

Mirrors shattering,
as again we fight,
just bad luck.

Arguments cause tears,
tears put me to sleep,
just like rain.

~if you want me to fall for you, you gotta give me something worth tripping over~

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

1 posted 2002-05-04 12:54 PM

Hmm, interesting.
This was short, but effective.
Sad, really.

Jenn

"I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about."

Punk Angel
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 66
Pennsylvania, US

2 posted 2002-05-05 03:17 PM

yeah this one WAS effective...but im tellin u....GET OVER HIM!!! geeze!! i mean....DDDDUUUUHHHH!!!! he only hurts u EVERYDAY!!! srry? lol luv ya ~kris

We love what is lost, but does what we lost love us back??
~*Krista*~

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

3 posted 2002-05-05 03:36 PM

wowwwwwwweeeeee!!!!!! dats weally good..i have an idea who its bout..but not sure! good write! ~Jess

*-LiFe TaKeZ uR DrEaMz aNd TuRnZ tHeM uPsIdE dOwN..FrIeNdZ TaLk AbOuT U WhEn uR nOT aRoUnD..PeOpLe MaKe PrOmIsEz THeY JuST CaN'T KeEp..& i'Ve cOmE tO

Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

4 posted 2002-05-07 01:13 AM

I agree w/ the other replys . . . This is an effective poem, a really sad one @ that. Great poem.

Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown

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